ELEMANTAL PROLOGUE PG.3

THIS IS A TEST COMIC AND IM ASKING EVERYONE IF THEY COULD CRITIQUE MY WORK BECAUSE I DON'T THINK IM SATISFIED . TELL ME WHERE THERE NEEDS WORK( I ALREADY KNOW SOME OF MY PAGES AREN'T COMPLETE) AND HOW I CAN IMPROVE IT.

P.S PLEASE CRITIQUE SERIOUSLY AND GIVE A RATING OF 1- 10 STARS

P.S.S IF I GET 10 FAVS ALTOGETHER I WILL CONTINUE THIS PROLOGUE UP TO WHEN IT GETS GOOD. REMEMBER!! THIS IS A TEST AND NOT MY REAL WORK

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